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That Frequent Visitor Every Face has a darker side Mr K Hari Kumar Books

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That Frequent Visitor Every Face has a darker side Mr K Hari Kumar Books

This is a challenging book to read because it seems like it is translated into English - and it's a rough translation. The sentences do not flow together, there seems to be words that just don't fit, and the reader needs to sort of translate the translation to figure out the intention.

The book is separated into three parts. The second part is written better - as if it was actually written in english and not translated. Parts one and three are riddled with editing problems such as punctuation and spacing issues. Part one has issues with the age of the little girl: at one point she is nine, another she is seven, another she is sixteen. I think she is supposed to be nine the whole way through. Part three has an issue with a character name being consistent. I also question the translation of the relationship of the old woman and the young girl. Through the story, it seems the old woman is a grandmother, not great-grandmother as is written. If it's supposed to be great-grandmother, there is a missing generation in the story. Part two is a cleaner. Overall, there is an overuse of the term "dear," and it's strange to read a nine year old addressing her father as dear.

As a horror/thriller story, it's okay. As a supernatural story, it's okay. Most of the action happens outside of the book and is merely retold. There is only one really gruesome part which happens for about one page toward the end. The rests is mere retelling of what happened in the past.

There are just so many errors and inconsistencies that I cannot recommend this book.


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That Frequent Visitor Every Face has a darker side Mr K Hari Kumar Books Reviews

Good book
Good storyline.
Catchy and intruding. Bit backwards and forwards in the time line.
Did not get the answer for who killed all the guest!
A beautiful story.
Great read, lots of unexpected twists
I was surprised with this book! It was great from beginning to end. I didn't want to put the book down. It was amazing watching the story unfold. The story sucks you in like you are there with them! I'll be looking for more books by these authors!
This was rather different from the topics I normally read but found it very entertaining. It was a good story, with engaging characters in an exotic environment. It needs some editing but otherwise worthwhile.
I got this book free, so I feel it's only fair I write a review.

First of all, let me say the premise is really quite good. I liked the actual story being told, however...

this book is in crying need of an editor. Missing words, incorrect names, lots of things that are going to catch the reader straight off and pull you right out of the book. The dialogue is stilted and not realistic; especially that of the nine-year-old. You could see the deus ex machina from space; a totally predictable ending. I realize the author's original language probably isn't English, however, that just means he really needs to consult the dictionary more. Some of the words he uses in sentences do not mean what he thinks they mean, and it's distracting.

This book could have been awesome. Instead, it's barely mediocre.
This is a challenging book to read because it seems like it is translated into English - and it's a rough translation. The sentences do not flow together, there seems to be words that just don't fit, and the reader needs to sort of translate the translation to figure out the intention.

The book is separated into three parts. The second part is written better - as if it was actually written in english and not translated. Parts one and three are riddled with editing problems such as punctuation and spacing issues. Part one has issues with the age of the little girl at one point she is nine, another she is seven, another she is sixteen. I think she is supposed to be nine the whole way through. Part three has an issue with a character name being consistent. I also question the translation of the relationship of the old woman and the young girl. Through the story, it seems the old woman is a grandmother, not great-grandmother as is written. If it's supposed to be great-grandmother, there is a missing generation in the story. Part two is a cleaner. Overall, there is an overuse of the term "dear," and it's strange to read a nine year old addressing her father as dear.

As a horror/thriller story, it's okay. As a supernatural story, it's okay. Most of the action happens outside of the book and is merely retold. There is only one really gruesome part which happens for about one page toward the end. The rests is mere retelling of what happened in the past.

There are just so many errors and inconsistencies that I cannot recommend this book.